I want thank my sister, Diana McCollum, for inviting me to my
first Blog Hop. (It’s about the writing process.) I’d also like to give her a
shout out at www.dianamccollum.weebly.com .
Diana is one of the authors of LOVE & MAGICK:
Mystical Stories of Romance from Windtree
Press.
What am I working on?
So far,
I only have a title and a hero for my Valentine’s anthology story. A Portent of Peacocks is a YA romance
that takes place ten years after the events in Blindsight. My hero, Jake, was only seven when he used his psychic
Talent to help free himself and the other prisoners from a drug lord’s camp for
enslaved psychics. But life on the outside has not been easy for him.
His foster mother died in the escape.
Jake still misses her terribly. His biological parents are afraid of him and
his older foster brother is leaving on assignment with the FBI. Plus, there’s
this new girl at school. She’s locked down, sarcastic, even scary when she
wants to be—she’s an Illusionist—and none of his friends want anything to do
with her. But something about her makes Jake seek her out, no matter how many
times she cuts him off at the knees and twists him up inside.
This story is going to be so much
fun to write!
How does my work differ from
others of its genre?
Writing
instructor Alicia Raisley told me I write dark comedy. I think she meant I don’t
shy away from dark truths, but my voice is humorous and breezy, which keeps
readers reading through the tough parts.
I also
like to push the boundaries a little as a writer. My heroine in Blindsight lost
her sight in a car accident, but her blindness has nothing to do with her
psychic Talent. It just makes life more difficult for her in many ways. My
heroine in another book is an ex-con who was rightly convicted of trying to
kill a man with a manure shovel. Contrary to what the so-called experts told
me, I was able to make her a character my critique partners loved. I’m confident
my readers will love her, too.
And
last, but not least, dogs play a role in almost every story I write, although
when I started writing I thought I was a cat person. Go figure!
Why do I write what I do?
I write to entertain and uplift my readers, to
restore their faith in happy endings and give them hope.
How does my writing process
work?
Wait. There’s a process?
Seriously, I spend time on what I call pre-writing before beginning a first draft. This includes figuring
out my characters’ goals, motivations, and conflicts; mapping out the story
spine (inciting incident, turning points, ending.) I plot using four-act structure,
and it’s easier when I have a TP to write each act toward. I also do obvious
research during this time, such as researching the setting or a character
issue, like survivor’s guilt.
I’ve learned to knock my internal editor out for the duration of
my first draft. I need to go full-bore from start to finish. Once I have the
rough draft in hand, I wake her up and get to work. I sketch out what I’ve got
on a story board and then to story edits. This is also when I do a book
collage.
SARAH & FRECKLES |
The second draft is about adding description and sensory detail,
and deepening the emotion.
Then I polish before sending the story to my wonderful editor,
Kelly Schaube.
The next step is incorporating Kelly’s edits.
Then I send the story to my Beta readers.
I tweak the story if needed, and finally reach THE END of the
process.
This has Blog Hop has been fun! Thanks
for inviting me, Sis.
8 comments:
Wow, Sarah - your YA Valentine's short story looks amazing! I love the idea of taking a Blindsight character and building another story around him.
Your writing process is interesting. I know I do it backwards in that I have my Beta readers read it and I make their changes before sending to Kelly. They have a good albeit not perfect eye for story continuity, grammar, punctuation, etc.
When Kelly gets it she makes sure I've have more conflict, show my character's deep point of view more clearly, etc.
Thanks for sharing and good luck on getting those short stories and Blindsight done.
Awesome, process, Sarah! Your Valentine's short story sounds like a fun one to write. Sometimes the title is all I need to start a story, too. Good luck with your projects!~!
Enjoyed your blog. It is so interesting to see how our writer's minds work. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed your stories in Love and Magick. I can't wait to read your other stories. Louise
Hi Judith! Thanks for sharing your process. It's funny how we're each a little different in our process.
Diana, I wonder if we do so many writing things alike because we're sisters?
Thank you for your kind words, Louise! I agree it's really interesting to find out how other writers' minds work. Sometimes that helps me figure out my own process.
Sarah
Hi Sarah,
I really enjoyed hearing about your writing process. I really enjoy humor in my reading, and it sounds like you have lots of fun. I look forward to reading your work.
Wishing you all the best with your writing,
Naomi
Thank you for reading my post, Naomi. Your last post at Writing Between the Lines really clicked with me.
Great post, Sarah. And loved the pic of Freckles. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Robin. Freckles is my personal bad boy!
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