Just
because something is clichéd, that doesn't mean it won't sell – in fact, clichés
written well can be, and are, very popular. However, I always try to revitalize
them, or twist them so that I write a richer, fresher book, and give my readers
a deeper emotional read.
The
Evil Other Woman
I
love a good villain and often in romance of any genre the ‘other woman’ enters
the picture. Instead of making the rival evil, try a twist and make her very
likeable. It really will add more tension as the reader ends up torn. It also
leaves you the opportunity to give the ‘nice’ rival her own book.
I
did this in my Wicked Wagers Trilogy. In book #2, TO
WAGER THE MARQUIS OF WOLVERSTONE I set up Amy as the rival. She was nice,
likeable and you felt sorry for her. I hadn’t planned on giving her a book but
she was so loveable I had to. So I gave Amy her HEA in book #3, To Challenge
the Earl of Cravenswood. It worked really well.
Evil
Relatives
Children
are often shaped by their up-bring we know that. So it’s not unusual to have
the hero or heroine have a terrible childhood. I don’t find this plot clichéd
at all. It’s human nature and a fact of life.
However,
if you are going to do use this plot device, ensure the abusers character is
well developed and there is a reason for their behavior too. What drives their behavior, don’t just show
what they did, give us the background as to why.
I
did this in INVITATION
TO RUIN, my debut novel. I had a very damaged hero, who suffered years of
abuse from his father as a child. His father was a slave trader due to
financial problems and it took its toll on him. Therefore, he decides to
toughen his son up so that he doesn’t suffer running the slave operation like
he did.
The
Country Mouse Theme
This
is a cute name for an often-annoying story plot device, especially in
historicals. In my latest release INVITATION
TO PASSION, I put my own twist on it by having my heroine grow up in the
country but with the hero as her best friend, a Regency times pen pal. He was a
lot older and a rake. She would write to him and ask him anything and he would
answer honestly. It put a great twist on how to open a country mouse’s eyes and
give her character depth.
The
Naive Virginal Heroine
A
perfect cliché for a Regency romance. Women were often kept in the dark about
sexual relations and in fact were not really even told anything on their
wedding nights but to let your husband do what he likes and to lie back and
think of England. I like this cliché because it allows me to write really
sensual and intimate ‘first-time’ sex scenes. I’ve had so many comments about
my marriage of convenience first time scene in A
PROMISE OF MORE, book #1 in my Disgraced Lords series. It’s very moving.
Don’t waste an opportunity to grab your readers’ emotions. This cliché can do
this.
The Man Slut
In
historicals men slept around, it was the way of the world at the time whatever
era you write in. It’s a given cliché for a historical that the hero will be
experienced in bed. Some authors have tried making a hero a virgin or of
limited experience, but it doesn’t work for me. I like a man to be in charge in
the bedroom at the beginning, but have the heroine soon turn the tables on him.
I try to set the hero a challenge in the bedroom no matter how experienced he
is.
I did this
in A
KISS OF LIES; book #1 in my Disgraced Lords series, by having my heroine
come out of an abusive relationship. My hero’s rakish seduction tricks would
not work here. He had to dig deeper and face real emotions in order to help
heal the heroine.
The
Silly Big Misunderstanding
In
real life, characters can have misunderstandings. If your big
misunderstanding can be unraveled with a brief discussion, then your plot has
holes in it. This is my big bug bearer when I read a romance. If two
intelligent people can’t sit down and sort out a misunderstanding then why do I
want to invest time in them? If the book revolves around a misunderstanding,
have VERY good reasons why they cannot talk about it. In my only contemporary
(so far) THE
RELUCTANT WIFE, there is a complicated misunderstanding built around deep
emotional scars.
Summary
Clichés work because they are what all of us look for in our
escapism. However, that doesn’t mean we cannot personalize them or twist them
or simply use them to deepen a reader’s emotional journey. Remember, everything
about writing can be used if done well. I challenge you to write the best clichés
you can.
What cliché books are some of your favorites?
1 comment:
Thanks for an interesting post, Bron. A favorite romantic cliche book does not pop out so I'll do some thinking and if something comes up, I'll be back! to share.
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