Monday, April 13, 2020

Stories that resonate or not...


By: Marcia King-Gamble
www.lovemarcia.com




So I have to admit I have been going back and forth with this topic. Which to choose? Favorite or most difficult writing achievement? A favorite is always the easy part, my most difficult was, however, not an achievement. It was a bomb. I received the worst reviews ever.

Let’s start with the difficult one first,  and hopefully end on a high note. By the way the difficult one still stings.



Back  then I worked for Harlequin/Silhouette, when an author unexpectedly dropped out of the Bombshell line, I was asked to fill in. For those of you unfamiliar with Bombshell, it was what most would call a shoot em up, bomb em up,  line, with an element of romance.   Think thriller. Think espionage. Think terrorism.  I’m a contemporary romance writer, and not necessarily into destruction, I’m all about making love and not war, so, yes, this was a challenge. Still, I was willing  to rise to that challenge,  and I was honored to be chosen, never mind that I didn’t have much time to formulate a plot.

No excuses. The story fell flat. I accepted the job and should have delivered.  And in little or no time,  I wrote Meet Phoenix. Here’s what the story was supposed to deliver:
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Brilliant, beautiful and brazen, art expert Phoenix Sutherland is prepared for anything when she embarks on a daring quest to recover a priceless statue—anything except having her sexy ex-husband, Damon, as a specialist on her team. Phoenix vows to remain professional. But with Damon's lean, strong body awakening buried longing, forbidden pleasure beckons as they enter the heart of Tibet, where danger, adventure and mystery await.

Soon the thrill of the moment rekindles sparks of desire neither Phoenix nor Damon can resist, as they recklessly toss inhibitions aside and discover the only real treasure worth risking everything to claim.

And here is a sample of one of the reviews this book received. All, though worded differently, concluded it was the worse book I’d ever written. On rereading I agree.


“I am saying that this book is not one of Marcia King-Gamble's normal books. I have read a couple of books she has written and this one just did not hit the mark.” 


Lesson learned - When you don’t deliver what’s expected, or step out of your comfort zone, at least change your name.


Now onto my favorite writing achievement. Over a decade ago, I was given the opportunity to write mainstream books; meaning these were relationship driven books, and did not necessarily have to follow the series format. They were bigger books.  

I’d become obsessed with the plight of children born to American soldiers in Vietnam. I had read that these mixed children had a difficult time in a culture that viewed them and their mothers as outcasts.  Jade’s story was about a woman who finds out after many years,  her parents aren’t her real parents, so  she  sets off for Vietnam to find her mother and the truth.
 Ironically, the release date of Jade coincided with the 25th anniversary of Operation Babylift.

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For those of you unfamiliar with Operation Babylift, it was the name given to the mass evacuation of children from South Vietnam  on  April 3-26 1975 to the United States and other countries.  At that time, thousands of children were airlifted from Vietnam and adopted by families around the world.

A pair of well-worn baby shoes worn by an orphan evacuated from Vietnam during Operation Babylift

On April 3, 1975, then President Gerald Ford announced that the U.S. government would evacuate orphans from Saigon on a series of 30 planned flights. The challenge was to find homes for the Asian-American orphans. To the rescue came American businessman Robert Macauley who  learned that because of a lack of military transport planes, it would take more than a week to evacuate the surviving orphans. Macauley then chartered a Boeing 747 from World Airways and arranged for 300 orphaned children to leave the country. He paid for the trip by mortgaging his house. The good news was that over 2,500 children were relocated, and adopted by families in the United States and elsewhere. 

I really enjoyed writing this story, because not only did it require extensive research, I was forced to rely on my memories of visiting other Asian countries for the sights, smells and feel of  Vietnam. The plot line required a lot of “What ifs.”

Contrary to my other offering, Jade made the Bestselling list in several states.



Here’s one of the many reviews:


What a great read! Now I realize that the decision not to have read it sooner almost cost me the opportunity to share with my reading public just what could have been missed. It is my opinion that writers should be able to write across the board every now and then to recreate other centers of reference for diversity. Marcia King-Gamble did this as she crafts a novel much different than what she is known for. She too, as I further opine, is an underrated writer whom should be placed among those who are considered leaders in their genres.

In conclusion, writers have their ups and downs. Some stories resonate with the reading public, others go over like a flat tire. The important thing is we continue to write. Because as writers,  we are compelled to tell the stories in our heart.  



About Marcia King-Gamble
Romance writer, Marcia King-Gamble originally hails from a sunny Caribbean island where the sky and ocean are the same mesmerizing shade of blue. This travel industry executive and current world traveler has spent most of life in the United States. A National Bestselling author, Marcia has penned over 35 books and 8 novellas. Her free time is spent at the gym, traveling to exotic locales, and caring for her animal family.
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6 comments:

Judith Ashley said...

Great post, Marcia. I worked for almost 30 years in International Adoption and many of "my families" adopted from VietNam. In the beginning these were abandoned children but by the end, VietNam required the parents' to sign releases. Orphanages had to do a search for the parents. When that happened, adoptive families were able to keep connected to birth families so children could meet their birth families if they wished to.

Marcia King-Gamble said...

How fascinating Judith and how worthwhile. The sad thing I found out from Operation Babylift is that some of the kids brought over were not orphans. I think that's just awful!

Judith Ashley said...

Marcia, many of the children adopted from VietNam were not orphans which is why the government at one point stopped adoptions and when they opened again, the orphanages had to do searches for the at least the biological mother and she had to sign releases. Mothers were shoving their young children at soldiers, doing everything they could to send their children off to the US where they believed they'd have a better life.

This also happened in some of the adoptions in Africa. I remember sibling (brother and sister) once here and speaking English telling us that it was their uncle who signed papers saying they were orphaned and their father was with him putting them on the plane saying it was important that they do this (this being going to the US and living with another family).

In China, babies were "abandoned" at bus and train stations where they would be found as soon as they whimpered. Also left on the door steps of police stations and orphanages during the night.

Most of us cannot fathom what it would be like to not be able to feed ourselves much less our child. A heart-rending movie that I've only watched once because it touched me so deeply is "Sophie's Choice" - In all my years of working in child welfare and adoptions, I've never met a birth mother who was not traumatized by either signing relinquishment papers or adoption papers much less having CPS take the newborn away from the hospital. One mother sobbed that she wanted to be a mom but knew she couldn't but refused to sign relinquishment papers. In her mind, it made a difference in having her baby "taken away" rather than "given away."

Marcia King-Gamble said...

I don't know if I could do what you did Judith. It would break my heart.

Maggie Lynch said...

I love your last paragraph: "In conclusion, writers have their ups and downs. Some stories resonate with the reading public, others go over like a flat tire. The important thing is we continue to write. Because as writers, we are compelled to tell the stories in our heart. "

It is so true! We write the stories that speak to us, whether they are in the same vein as the previous ones or not. I have certainly done that and it has not been as financially rewarding as probably sticking with one genre would be. But, for each series I was compelled to write those stories. After all, if we don't feel the story then our readers will know that, too.

Thanks for sharing your two experiences.

Marcia King-Gamble said...

Thanks Maggie for adding your two cents. As writers we are compelled to write. Writing can be an extremely humbling experience. I have never fit into a "niche" and from the very beginning was told I had more of a mainstream voice. I have stayed firm telling the stories I want to tell. Like you it has not been the most financially rewarding experience, but it has been fulfilling.