Monday, June 6, 2022

Striving for Authenticity by Paty Jager

 While I enjoy a book that is set in a location where I’ve never been, I find setting a book in a real place is hard.

Over the years, I have set most of my books in areas that I enjoyed visiting. When I have set foot somewhere I’ve not been before, I can take in the nuances. The smells, sights, atmosphere, and climate. I like to add those to my books.

However, the downfall of setting a book somewhere others have been, I have to make sure I get the geographical places correct, the buildings, the roads, and the waterways correct. Which makes writing a real setting harder than just making something up. In a fictional town, you can place the businesses and streets where you like and no one will question their validity.


When writing my historical western romance novels, it was easy to use real places and go off of Sanford maps of towns in the 1800s. I enjoyed following the streets with my finger and taking my characters down the streets. Many instances those maps have the businesses marked on them. Even though I used the maps, there is no one alive who could have said, “that wasn’t there” except perhaps a historian of that area.

In my Isabella Mumphrey Action-Adventure trilogy, I had to use information from books, websites, and people who had traveled to Guatemala and Mexico City. They were two places I hadn’t been and my husband didn’t think I needed to travel to. 😉 I then had the books read by people who either lived there (Guatemala) or had traveled there to make sure I captured the feel of the areas.

For my Shandra Higheagle mystery series, I set it in a fictional Idaho ski resort. But I used information about two areas in Idaho to make up my fictional setting. That series also has books set on the Confederated Tribes of the Colville Reservation. For those books, a friend who lives on the reservation gave me a tour and read the book for accuracy.


My second mystery series, Gabriel Hawke Novels, is set in the area where I grew up. It gives me a chance to go back when I want to get photos for covers and social media and to make sure I remember things correctly. Though to keep from anyone saying I am writing about them, I changed the names of the towns in the county where I grew up and populated it with my own characters and businesses.  I keep all the geographical places the same. I did set one of these books in Iceland after I’d traveled there. That was fun to write that setting as I had the characters go to places I had visited.

My newest mystery series, Spotted Pony Casino mysteries, is set on the Confederated Tribes of the Umatilla Reservation. In this series, I am keeping everything except the casino real. I have made up my own casino so I didn’t have to get into all the true details of running one to write the series. This way I can have my own way of running it and because I have people murdered in the Spotted Pony, it is not to be a reflection on the real casino. I am currently talking with several people to have them beta read for more accuracy in the culture of the people who live there.  I had a woman from there help with the first book in the series but then things started happening in her life and she became too busy to read for me.

Many people say setting can be as strong an element in a book as a character. I agree. I don’t believe my last two mystery series would be what they are without the setting I have put them in.

Do you like a setting that stands up to the rest of the book or do you prefer character-driven stories and minimal setting?


Paty Jager is an award-winning author of 53 novels, 8 novellas, and numerous anthologies of murder mystery and western romance. All her work has Western or Native American elements in them along with hints of humor and engaging characters. Paty and her husband raise alfalfa hay in rural eastern Oregon. Riding horses and battling rattlesnakes, she not only writes the western lifestyle, she lives it.

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5 comments:

Diana McCollum said...

I really enjoyed your blog post and how you come up with settings.

Yes, I do enjoy having the setting seem real and an intergal part of the book.

It takes me away from my everyday surroundings to a new and different location.

Great post!

Heather Haven said...

I have not yet read all of Paty's books, but they are on my reading bucket list. One of the reason's is how she creates an atmosphere that resonates with the reader.

Judith Ashley said...

Paty, I've read some of your books and see a good blend of setting with character driven stories. The stories would not be as rich without the setting and the characters would lack an essential piece of who they are because they engage with the settings. Although I've read your western historical, Isabella Mumphrey and some Shandra Higheagle books, my favorites are the Spirit Trilogy. I can't imagine the stories in another setting.

Paty Jager said...

Thanks, Diana, the books I enjoy most are ones in settings I don't know. I agree it's like traveling without leaving my chair. ;)

Hi Heather, thanks for popping in and commenting and leaving such kind words.

Hi Judith, The Spirit Trilogy are my favorite books I've written in the romance genre. I think my Gabriel Hawke books are my favorite in mystery.

Paty Jager said...

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