Madelle Morgan's New Release - Hollywood Hero

Unrequited love is hell on earth. Wendy Davila is desperately in love with a man out of her league in Hollywood Hero, my new contemporary romance—Book 3 in the Hollywood in Muskoka series.

Description

Personal assistant Wendy Davila is in love with her boss, Halden Armstrong, megastar of the Apollo superhero film franchise. But she can’t compete with the succession of stick-thin blond beauties he’s caught and released. Or can she? When Halden asks Wendy to accompany him on a fishing trip to Muskoka, it’s her chance to remake her dark-haired, curvy Latina self into his ideal woman and cast her hook for Halden.

 

Halden has been burned by love. The last thing he wants is a woman like his ex who faked it until she landed him. Wendy is special, and the private trip is an opportunity to explore his feelings for her. However, the Greek god has an Achilles’ heel. Can he trust Wendy with a secret that could ruin his career? And will she still care for him when she learns the truth?

When Apollo falls off his pedestal, Wendy must decide if the man she adores is a keeper.

A Bit of Background

We first meet Wendy Davila in Caught on Camera, Book 1 in the Hollywood in Muskoka series. In that novel, Wendy is the personal assistant (PA) to Candy Kane, the bridezilla. Hollywood Hero is set a year after Candy and Halden’s disastrous wedding, and may be read as a standalone romance.

Star-crossed lovers Halden and Wendy have a rocky journey from boss-employee to romantic partners in Hollywood Hero. Not only is Halden a completely different guy away from Hollywood, city girl Wendy is a fish out of water in the Muskoka wilderness.

Hollywood Hero Excerpt: First Kiss Scene 

“I’m valued for my physical appearance, not my ability. Some role model.” Hurt clogged Halden’s throat.

“Now you understand how women feel. Get over yourself.” Wendy slapped him on the chest and shoved to extricate herself from his lap.

“Not so fast.” He slid an arm around her waist and drew her close. Wendy’s practical, no-sympathy approach, so different from fawning Hollywood hangers-on, prodded him to think about his deep, dark secret from a different angle. He’d needed that kick in the ass, he realized. “I value your abilities.”

“Wonderful. Let me go.”

“I value everything about you.” Including the fact she’d known and kept his secret all along. He gently angled her chin with a forefinger. His mouth hovered over hers, savoring the moment.

She stilled in his arms. Firelight flashed in narrowed, wary chocolate eyes. “Is this a self-pity, ‘make yourself feel better with whoever’s handy’ kiss?”

His heart pounded as rapidly as it had a few minutes earlier, but for a different reason. “This is a ‘friends-fall-over-the-edge-to-lovers’ kiss.”

She exhaled. “Okay, then.”

Their lips touched, and he tasted joy. 

Preorder Hollywood Hero on Amazon for $0.99. The ebook will be published March 8, 2021 on Amazon, Kobo, and Apple Books. Visit MadelleMorgan.com for all buy links, as well as the link to the YouTube playlist that mirrors the progress of Wendy and Halden’s romance. 

About Madelle Morgan 

I’m a Canadian author who writes humorous, slightly steamy romance set in wild and beautiful Canada. My romantic thriller Diamond Hunter is a free read in Kindle Unlimited. 

Catch Up on the Series

I rebranded the Hollywood in Muskoka series with new covers for Caught on Camera (Book 1) and Seduced by the Screenwriter (Book 2). What do you think of the update?

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Editing Your Book, Part 2 Polishing

by Madelle Morgan

You've finished the second or third draft after the developmental edit (see Part 1), you've sent the manuscript out to beta readers and received their comments, and now it's time to polish the story.

At this stage, the scene structure is locked in. You will now go through the story paragraph by paragraph to:

• improve the flow;
• rewrite for clarity;
• strengthen plot and romantic tension;
• heighten emotion; and
• add details such as what each character is feeling, thinking, smelling, seeing, and hearing.

Here's an example of the difference between the draft and polished versions of a Caught on Camera scene snippet. Rachel, dressed in an oversized white bathrobe, is taking the little Maltese dog for her evening walk.

DRAFT
Blurry movement in the deep gloom under the pines beyond the terrace caught Mickey's eye. A ghostly wraith drifted between trees beyond the corner of the building. A white ball appeared to roll at lawn level. He inhaled sharply.

Holy Hotel California. Twenty feet from the terrace, at the limits of the flickering torchlight, the creepy forms halted.

"Mickey," the taller phantom hissed, beckoning with an undulating wave of an unearthly arm. "Over here."

Mickey cautiously stepped off the flagstones onto the grass. "Who are you?"

FINAL: I punched up Mickey's reaction, added a movie reference, and hopefully made the exchange more amusing.

Blurry movement in the deep gloom under the pines beyond the terrace caught Mickey's eye. A ghostly wraith drifted between trees. A white ball appeared to roll at lawn level.

Mickey inhaled sharply. Holy Hotel California. He held his breath as the creepy forms advanced to twenty feet from the terrace and halted at the limits of the flickering torchlight. Where are the Ghostbusters when you need them?

"Mickey," the taller phantom hissed, beckoning with an undulating wave of an unearthly arm. "Over here."

"No thanks," he demurred. "It's not my time yet."

"Mickey!"

He cautiously stepped off the flagstones onto the grass. "Who or what in hell are you?"

Read the Story Aloud

By this stage in the book crafting process, you've read the manuscript so many times that it's impossible to notice the problems. Listening engages another part of the brain, helping to identify what needs to be fixed. While reading your story aloud, or having someone else read it aloud, you'll be taking notes on these issues:

1. Does the dialogue sound like something a man, woman, teen or child of that age would naturally say?

I have to remember that I'm writing for ages from "Does your mother know you're reading this?" to "My granddaughter recommended this book and I love it too!"

2. Is the vocabulary suited to the target readers? Are you using a sophisticated or old-fashioned word when a simple, more current word would do?

A young Wattpad.com reader commented that the draft's language was "so 19th century." It compelled me to revisit my word choices in the entire manuscript. For example, the hotel general manager has a staff policy against "fraternizing" with the guests. The prim and proper GM might say "fraternize" but the young staff would use the term "hook-up". I made many similar changes to update the vocabulary.

3. Are the pauses in the right place for reading aloud at a public reading or in an audiobook?

Even if long sentences are grammatically correct, they can be problematic if and when your book is made into an audiobook. 

4. Are you using certain words over and over and over?

Replace words that occur frequently. For example, I tend to use "sprang", "wildly", and "dragged" repeatedly. An online dictionary and thesaurus is a writer's friend. Use the software's "Find" function to search your document for specific words. You'll be amazed at how frequently—oops, I mean—often you used them on the same page or even in a single paragraph without noticing.

5. Is the meaning what you intended? Can it be misinterpreted?

A beta reader saved me from considerable embarrassment. Micky and Halden, the groom, are discussing Halden's sister Asta, who is a stuntwoman.

DRAFT
Mickey said only, "Speed is Asta's drug of choice."
"She's a daredevil, all right. Keeps Mom up at night worrying."

FINAL
Mickey said only, "Adrenaline is Asta's drug of choice."
"She's a daredevil, all right. Keeps Mom up at night worrying."

I totally missed the fact that "speed" is the street name for amphetamine!

After you've spent a week or longer polishing the story, it's time to send it off to the copy editor. In Part 3 I'll describe the copy-editing of Caught on Camera.

Goodreads Giveaway!

Enter a Goodreads Giveaway starting October 13 to win one of two paperback copies of Caught on Camera (Hollywood in Muskoka, Book 1). This giveaway ends October 20, and is open to residents of the United Kingdom and Canada, as well as the United States.

Caught on Camera is available for $0.99 and £0.99 on Amazon, Kobo, and iBooks, and is now available in paperback on Amazon for $9.99 and £5.99. See the description, playlist and buy links at MadelleMorgan.com . 

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