This month we were asked to share our favorite wedding
story ~ and one from our book was a "legal" choice. In "A Woman
of Choice" my hero Nicolas tells the heroine Sydney that his grandparents
met on the ship from Norway to America, and when the boat docked his father was
a month past conception.
If that's not a romance
plotline, I don't know what is!
Here is a scene from my
current work in progress, the moment that Dagny realizes she is going to be
married to Martin. And that at this point, she doesn't have any other options
before her:
The captain’s presence was expected. The
purser’s presence was understandable. The first mate’s wasn’t a surprise. But
what was Martin Hansen doing here?
Martin came to her and
grabbed her cold hands in his large warm ones. His eyes bore into hers. “I’m
sorry, darling, I had to tell them the truth.”
“What truth?” Dagny
demanded. Was he going to bury her further?
His gaze was so intense he
didn’t even blink. “I told them that whenever your – brother,” his eyes
narrowed slightly, “left you unchaperoned that we stole away together.”
Dagny had no brother. None
of this made any sense. Perhaps the time she spent imprisoned in the hold had
addled her mind. “Martin, what are you talking about?”
“Dagny, sweetheart, you
don’t need to pretend anymore.” He tilted his head toward the captain. “He
knows everything. And we’re here to make it right.”
Dagny shook her head a
little and fought to draw a deep breath against the pressure that constricted
her chest. Tiny gnats flew through her vision. “Martin tell me, please, what
have you said?”
Martin led her to a chair
and sat her down. “Might you give her a cup of wine?” he asked the purser.
The man went to the
captain’s sideboard and poured a glass of red wine and pressed it into Dagny’s
hand. She stared at it, confused as to why it was given to her.
Martin lifted her hand so
the cup touched her lips. “Take a sip, my love. Your nerves are understandably
distressed at this news. But it was the only way to clear your name.”
Dagny gulped the wine. Its
warmth settled in her belly and slowly leaked into her chest. It was easier to
breathe, now, and she no longer felt near to collapse. She handed the empty cup
to Martin. His words hit her consciousness.
“You cleared my name?” she
asked.
Martin shrugged and looked
embarrassed. “Well, the part about the thefts.”
Dagny glanced at the other
men. They all looked a little embarrassed. She felt a surge of hysteria.
“What – what other part is
there?” she coughed.
Martin knelt in front of her so his eyes
were level with hers. He held her hands again, so tightly it hurt. If he hadn’t
looked so distraught, Dagny would have pulled away. His words tumbled out like
a life-ending avalanche.
“I told them that when we
were together, without your brother Torvald’s knowledge, that I took your
maidenhead and have ruined your reputation. Captain Gilsen has agreed to marry
us here, now, so that these wrongs may be set right. The other two gentlemen
are to act as legal witnesses.”
Dagny’s mind understood
Martin’s statement one slow word at a time. And as it did, a fury like she had
never known took her over. She yanked one hand from his and slapped Martin
across the face with every ounce of her outrage. The stinging sound rang
through the small space and the other three men cringed.
Martin didn’t move.
As the outline of her
fingers reddened and swelled over his cheek, he held on to her other hand. His
green eyes were fixed on hers.
Angered beyond measure at
his lack of response, Dagny slapped him again. This time, she felt the pain in
her own hand. Martin’s eyes watered and his jaw clenched, but his hands still
held one of hers. His gaze didn’t waver.
“How dare you?” Dagny
croaked.
Working title:
"Leaving Norway"
Releasing late
2012
4 comments:
My granddaughter wrote an essay for her history class on one good thing that came out of the Chinese Revolution. She wrote about how parents arranged the marriages and often the 'couple' met for the first time at the wedding. She was horrified at the idea she couldn't choose who she'd spend the rest of her life with (among other things).
Reading your excerpt, Kris, I'm reminded of the challenges the women before us faced and I'm grateful beyond measure that some of them found the courage to stand up for those of us who came behind.
I know Dagny marries Martin and they figure out their HEA but it was not always the case. Thank goodness we can make sure things turn out well in the end. One of the blessings of being the author!
Great excerpt, Kris!
Thanks, Paty! And, so true, Judith!
I'm so looking forward to reading this book! Love the excerpt!
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