07-21-18 Patricia Sargeant

Thursday, November 26, 2015



 Why do I write historical romance: Because I love history.

The most important aspects are:
You must be passionate about your subject in a historical novel. You might get away
without this passion in a contemporary but you won’t in a historical:

Historical Accuracy. Without that, your novel is doomed and so are you.

Write about an era that you are interested in.

I am not into Medieval or Regency, so it would be tedious tyring to do the research required for this, and I wouldn’t have the passion about it, and I am sure this would show in my writing.

 Research Options:
The internet (use with caution as you can’t be 100% sure that the person who posted knows what they are talking about).
Library reference books – a great place to start.
Quizzing elderly relatives (depending, of course, which era you are writing about)

2nd World War, Vietnam, Great Depression – all o.k. because they would have lived during these times.
Reading family diaries and/or letters.
Actually visiting places where you story takes place or somewhere similar.

e.g. I visited the old Melbourne jail for my novel, Daring Masquerade, because my heroine was jailed for being a spy. I wanted to see what it was like. The walls were solid bluestone, and cold, even on a warm day. The cell was small etc.

Name towns: Know the area. What grows etc. I always set most of my stories in N.E. Victoria because I know the area well. Mention a few main towns, but I never be too specific, because you can get easily caught out.  I always make up a fake town near a main town or city.

In my novel, Allison’s War, set in 1916, I said the heroine lived at Dixon’s Siding (made up name) i.e The left the farm at Dixon’s Siding, and after an hours riding (horses) reached Wangaratta.

I PURPOSELY DID NOT SAY Dixon’s Siding was (10 miles west of Wangaratta on the Greta/Myrtleford Road, because I didn’t know for sure, that there wasn’t a giant lake there or a massive quarry at that time (1916).


 Lauren’s Dilemma

1.30a.m., 25th April 1915. Gallipoli Peninsula, Turkey

Private Danny Williamson shivered in the chilly air as he waited on the deck of the troopship. In the darkness he couldn’t see land, even though someone said it was less than three miles away. When his turn came, he climbed down the rope ladder and found himself in an open boat. Excitement surged through him. He had travelled halfway around the world for this moment and was keen to give a good account of himself.

A.    Landing at Gallipoli 0130 hrs – not 1.30a.m. No soldier would say 1.30a.m. The army always uses the 24 hour clock

 My novel, A Wicked Deception is set in 1854 on the goldfields.

 On arrival at the homestead, Melanie unsaddled the mare and let her loose in the stockyards James had constructed from split logs. Surprising how neglected a house became after being left empty for a few days.
Within 5 minutes she had dusted the kitchen and was sitting down having a cup of hot milky tea?


Where did she get the milk?

  1.  Not out of the refrigerator that is for sure. She would have had to milk the cow. Water would have to be boiled on wood stove? She would have had to light the stove, maybe even cut the wood.
In Daring Masquerade 1916. The heroine goes to ring Colonel Andrew Smith. She punches in the telephone number –  and waits for him to pick up the phone? No.

 A.      She dialled the operator at the telephone exchange etc. And she certainly didn’t use her mobile phone.

On her wedding night, her nightgown was exquisite, a soft, white polyester, lavishly trimmed with lace.
A. No polyester in those days.
Know the area you are writing about:  In my novel, A Rose In No-Man’s Land, the heroine is in England. It was December, the sun streamed down from a cloudless blue sky and Amy felt so hot didn’t know how she would be able to walk back to the railway station.

A.        It would be winter in England in December.

 Beware of modern language and slang.
A poor, uneducated person wouldn’t speak the same way as a rich, educated person.

 So, as you can see there are many pitfalls to writing historical fiction, but if you have a genuine love of history it is a pleasure to write in this genre.

Margaret's Website:  http://www.margarettanner.com

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All the books mentioned have been published by Books We Love and are available at Books We Love or Amazon


1 comment:

Judith Ashley said...

And because you pay attention to these details, Margaret, I am a fan!
Thanks for sharing these "traps" because some of them are valid for contemporary authors as well.