Showing posts with label Trains. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Trains. Show all posts

Friday, August 22, 2014

Train of Thought—Unintended Consequences

This month’s blog theme—Trains, Planes & Automobiles—provides me an opportunity to share a fond childhood memory.

I grew up in Keokuk, in the southeast corner of Iowa. My aunt & uncle lived 400 miles away in Spirit Lake in Iowa’s northwest corner. Given that Iowa had no diagonal roads in the late 1950s—it still has dang few—it took a LONG time to tack across Iowa by car. With Mom at the wheel, it took even longer, since we drove at posted back road speeds, stopped to visit sites like the Little Brown Church in the Vale, paused to chow down on meatloaf sandwiches, and visited, oh, a dozen filling station restrooms since Mom, my sister and I seemed to keep different bathroom schedule.

All of this is to explain why Mom decided to put her ten-year-old daughter (me) on a train to Spirit Lake when I begged to travel a week ahead of the rest of the family so I could attend Camp Foster, a really cool YMCA camp with canoeing, archery, and all kinds of fun stuff.

The travel plan sounded straight forward. Mom would drive me the first 100 miles to put me aboard a passenger train for the remaining 300 miles. Then my aunt and uncle would collect me. I didn’t have to change trains, and the trip was slated to take maybe six hours. The conductor assured Mom he’d take care of me.

Turns out I was the sole passenger in the only passenger car. All other cars were filled with passengers who mooed. So the passenger car got bumped at our first stop, and I got to ride in the caboose. Fortunately, I knew how to play poker, the conductor’s game of choice.

About three hours in as we approached the engineer’s home town, we encountered some sort of mechanical problem. The engineer took me to his home, where I played with his red-haired daughter Zelda—I can still picture her. The engineer collected me hours later when whatever problem existed was fixed. And I went back to playing poker in the caboose.

Of course, I was oblivious to the fact that my mom, aunt and uncle were frantic that I was hours late. My aunt finally reached someone who told her that one little girl and several hundred head of cattle were headed her way—just a little late. I had a blast. The trip was almost as much fun as Camp Foster.

Maybe these kinds of experiences are why I remain a “seat of the pants” author, who never outlines a novel before she starts writing. I like the freedom to veer off in different directions as new plot opportunities arise. It keeps the writing fun.


So do you go with the flow when the unexpected happens? Does your willingness to improvise/adjust have an impact on how you write?  

Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Planes, trains and SCARY STUFF...

I've got nothing.

Frankly, I'm racking my brains for a connection between paranormal and vehicles. So here we go with some haunted automobiles, wacky modes of travel, and transport-y stuff that frightened the bejesus out of me one time. Shut up, okay? It's the best I've got. Let's begin:

1. Haunted automobiles.


Oyy. The Spielberg movie Duel, where the unseen driver of an enormous truck -- or could the truck be ALIVE, people?!? -- totally monsters an innocent motorist. Brrr.

An honorable mention to Stephen King's Christine, every petrolhead's nightmare.

2. Crazy stuff that happens in automobiles. The Hitcher, folks. Rutger Hauer randomly kills people who pick him up on a lonely highway. At one point, there's a finger in the French fries. The scariest damn thing I'd ever seen when I was twelve. The Sean Bean remake comes pretty close, too - but Rutger got me young.

3. Trains full of psychos. The Midnight Meat Train by Clive Barker. A story about a train, where... well, I'm not sure what the hell happened, to be honest. But it involved gore and meathooks, and me sleeping with the light on.

4. Trains full of coffins. The London Necropolis Railway. This was a real thing in the 1850s. London cemeteries were overcrowded, so they built a new one on the outskirts, and you jumped on this train with your coffin to get there. Not that sinister, really. I just think Necropolis Railway sounds cool and creepy :)

5. Zombies on a plane. No, not snakes. World War Z has this nerve-popping scene where zombies (no, not snakes) attack on an airborne plane. No, not snakes. Hungry, disgusting zombies. They want to bite you. YOU HAVE NOWHERE TO RUN. {die}


6. Okay, fine. SNAKES ON A PLANE. I rest my case:


Those are some of my faves. So what creepy vehicular shenanigans sticks in your mind?



Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Trains, all the way!

Hi everyone!
I am YA author B A Binns , writer of contemporary and realistic fiction for teens. My tagline says it all - Stories of Real Boys Growing Into Real Men - and the people who love them. This month I'm talking about travel.


And I happen to be a train girl, all the way. I look at a train-ride is time to write in peace and private. And to catch a load of scenery, setting and new personalities on the way.




Automobiles
I drive when I have to. Admittedly, "have to" sometimes equals the half-mile to the grocery store, but only because I come back laden with bags. I've driven as far away as Kentucky (I live in Illinois) and back, of course, but I hated it. I don't have a GPS, or a Smartphone, I'm still into paper maps and Mapquest. I even have the hero in my WIP stare helplessly at the GPS in his girlfriends car because he's been lost in the wilds of a third-world country for a decade and has no idea what to do with that thing. Believe it or not I am in the middle of teaching a class and telling my students to take themselves OUT of the character, but as I wrote that passage Kyle Logan from The Last Logan (coming fall 2014) was me. There are parts of technology I love and probably couldn't do without, and parts that make me feel like a latter-day Luddite. Especially if it's related to a car.

Planes
Planes are the only things worse on my hate-list. It's not about the shoe removal or body scan, the long lines and high cost of food since the planes no longer feed you.  Something about leaving the security of terra firma just gnaws at me. Do not even get started on earthquakes, OK? I do it when I have to, and I'm going to have to in October when I speak in Ohio at the OELMA (Ohio Educational Library Media Association) conference. I don't mind landing, I don't even mind turbulence, much. But leaving the ground -- terrifying. I sit in my seat and pretend nonchalance, book in hand, my mind repeating the 23rd Psalm alternating with Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep, I pray the Lord... One of my worst and never-to-be forgotten vacations involved six plane takeoffs and landings. It was supposed to be an Alaska cruise, but the boat was disabled and instead of refunding our money the travel company shlepped us around the state via small aircraft. There's nothing like boarding a tiny plane with one other passenger and a slew of mail and knowing that's all that's usually on board.

Never happening again.

Trains. 
If I have to go somewhere, and a train is a possibility, I'm on it.  CTA train, Metra, or Amtrak. Especially Amtrak where I can go first class all the way. In many ways it's like a cruise without the waves or the shore excursions.

Me and my hotel travel across the country together. As a sleeper passenger I get a quiet pre-boarding area away from the madding crowd with coffee, cokes and snacks. And I never have to take off my shoes. Once on the train I have a private room that includes a view, sofabed and shower. And more coffee and juice. And meals: appetizer, entree and desert. It's a community dining setup, real social networking. I've met some of the nicest (and some not so nice) people dining on trains.

Next year I'm going to Dallas, Texas via Amtrak for the Romance Slam Jam conference. Everyone else will fill the airport, I'll be cozy on my rolling hotel room  I know  could do it in a few hours by plane, plus the trip to the airport. And the time spent going through security.  In a too-tiny seat. But I'll consider the trip an extension on my vacation/conference. I'll get a ton of writing done.

Yeah, I like my plan better.


Monday, August 4, 2014

Hansom Cabs, Clipper Ships, and Trains by Paty Jager

The topic picked by the Queens of this blog couldn’t have landed any better for me. My latest release Staking Claim has nearly half the book taking place on a clipper ship. The characters also travel about New York City by Hansom cab and travel by train to Oregon.

Staking Claim is the second in the Halsey Homecoming trilogy. I already knew who the hero would be, Colin Healy, step-son of Ethan Halsey from my Halsey Brothers Series. Colin became a baronet when his father was killed. An event that prompted Colin’s mother to take him to America.

Staking Claim starts with Colin heading back home for his sister, Shayla’s, birthday and graduation from grammar school. He has always desired to travel by clipper ship because he prefers to stay in his cabin and read or do work.

Clipper Ship
A pretty passenger who requires his assistance, not once, but three times, captures his attention, and Colin finds himself taking many walks on the deck and joining her for meals in the dining area. I researched clipper ships and steamships. While the steamships were the rage to travel from continent to continent in 1899, there were still some clipper ships that booked passengers. I thought the ambiance and the lack of all the niceties and attention one received on a steamship fit not only Colin’s character but helped to show that the heroine and villain were out of place on such a ship.

It’s amazing the smallest thing a writer can find to enhance a story or show a character.

Hansom Cab
Not only does my hero and heroine cross the Atlantic by clipper ship, they also travel from New York City to Chicago via train and eventually on to Baker City, Oregon. Trying to find information on some of the stops and stations was fun and took time I hadn’t planned into the writing of the story. However, I think by doing my research it enriches the story.

The characters ride in a second class car after leaving a private car when they believe they are being followed. Discovering all about the differences in cars and the directions the trains leaving New York went was like following false leads in a treasure map.

I knew when I started this story it would be a stretch to get my hero home and find a way to make it entertaining and hold the reader to the end. The mystery and suspense I tossed in would not have worked as well if they hadn’t been traveling.

Staking Claim
Book Two – Halsey Homecoming Trilogy – Colin’s story

Deceit, contradictions, and lies.

On a ship bound for America, Colin Healy encounters a contradictory woman, whose beauty and grace intrigues him.

Livie Leatherby boards the ship as an imposter to get the information she needs to save her family. Befriending Sir Colin Healy is easy with his chivalrous tendencies. But she soon realizes discovering his past marks him for death.

Forced together to stay one step ahead of the Lord set on killing Colin for his estate, can these two get past the lies and deceit that has brought them together before one or the other meets their demise?

Excerpt
Back up on deck, Colin stood at the ship’s railing watching the dock workers load the cargo destined for New York. A glimpse of bright blue in the periphery of his vision, turned his attention to a small entourage headed to the ship’s gang plank.
There was no mistaking the long, bright blue coat and large, overly-flowered hat.
Where were the people now following her when he came to her aid earlier?
A servant girl followed the young woman. She carried what looked like a hat box and two men followed her carrying two large trunks on their shoulders. While the woman’s stride was self-assured, her head pivoted back and forth, her gaze taking in everything.
Why would someone clearly of gentry, use a sailing ship to travel when not one hundred feet away the Campania, a steamship in the Cunard line, was getting ready to set sail for America as well?
Before he registered his own movements, Colin discovered himself standing beside Captain Whiteside at the gangplank. The jovial captain enjoyed welcoming the passengers.
One of the reasons Colin picked going home by sailing ship rather than the faster steamship was to have fewer passengers to deal with, or in his case, hide from. He wasn’t a socializer like his sister, Shayla. He tended to have his mother’s trait of enjoying themselves just fine when alone or with family. Taking the slower sailing vessel gave him the option of never setting foot in a proper dining room or having to sit through conversations with strangers.
“Welcome!” boomed Captain Whiteside as the young woman stepped from the gangplank onto the vessel.
“Thank you, Captain.” She touched a gloved hand to her hat, then touched her earlobe showing beneath upswept copper-colored hair.
Colin didn’t want to think he was partial to red hair due to his mother’s fiery locks. This woman’s upswept hair was a more subtle hue. He found the shiny copper color mesmerizing.
“Your name?” Captain Whiteside inquired, holding a script with names and cabin numbers.
“Miss Olivia Leatherby.” The woman’s green gaze drifted from the captain to Colin. Her eyes widened, showing she recognized him from earlier. She made no move to thank or acknowledge him, and her gaze quickly returned to the captain.
Why didn’t she at least acknowledge my presence? Colin continued to study the young woman. The more he saw, the more he was intrigued. She was a good head shorter than he, but her curves and the way she set her feet to take the sway of the ship proved she wouldn’t float away in a good breeze. 
“Miss Leatherby, you will be staying in first cabin twelve.” Captain Whiteside tooted on his whistle and the cabin boy hurried forward.  “Jack, take Miss Olivia Leatherby to first cabin twelve.”
“Aye, Captain.” The young boy waved his hand for the woman and her belongings to follow.
Cabin twelve. That was two cabins down from Colin. Being practically neighbors, bumping into one another would be unavoidable.
He’d moved back to his spot at the railing when his gaze landed on another passenger whose fashionable attire and haughty manner didn’t fit with the usual sailing passenger. He’d come across a few men like this one since his return to England and taking charge of his estate. Why would a man of this class take a clipper rather than a steamship? He was the type who would think the accommodations on a clipper ship beneath him.
The wind didn’t carry the man’s name to him by the railing as Captain Whiteside greeted the stranger. It didn’t matter. He could always ask the cabin boy or the captain the gentleman’s name.
He turned his attention to the smoke puffing out of the Compania. A dark gray cloud puffed out adding more somber gray to the day. Passengers lined the deck of the steamship, waving at the people on the docks.
He could have been on that ship, surrounded by all the people and traveling in luxury, but he preferred the slower pace of the sailing vessel. He’d used his newly acquired connections in the shipping world to obtain a first cabin on the Americana. While he didn’t need the luxuries one had while on a steam ship, he did prefer traveling on a sailing ship in first class. The rooms were slightly larger, giving enough room to not feel as if he slept in a coffin, and the food, while not being served as elegantly, was filling and tasty.
The quiet, solitude, and time would allow him to go over the ideas his cousin Denis had handed him as he left Meath Hall. Even though he was excited to return to his family in Sumpter, he had become accustomed to riding about the thousand-acre estate talking to the tenants and discussing the best ways for them to grow better crops and livestock. Growing up, all he knew was mining, but living here, overseeing the land, he felt a kinship to both the people and the land.
“I guess you can take the boy out of the country but you can’t take the country out of the boy.” He grinned and headed to the first-class section of the ship. There would be a few more hours of spring sunlight streaming through his port hole. He’d best take advantage of the light to read the ideas Denis submitted.
He entered the covered stairwell and stopped.
Angry words flowed up the opening.
“I heard you were late.” The steely deep tone sounded like a threat.
“Ah had to say good-bye…”
He knew that soft wispy voice. Colin hurried down the stairs.

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Friday, August 1, 2014

Planes, Trains and Automobiles and ????

By Judith Ashley

About this time last year, Sarah and I met with our co-author and fellow Genre-ista, Diana McCollum at Detroit Lake, a small town situated in the Cascade Mountains about half-way between where we live. Sarah and I carpooled so we could take care of Romancing The Genre’s business on the way home. 

What was on our agenda? 

Brain storming the list of Guest and Genre-ista themes – and for August, 2014 we chose Planes, Trains and Automobiles. 

What’s missing? We covered travel by air and land but we missed water. Why is that important? It’s important because in the time period of Sarah’s short story Curse of the Neahkahnie Treasure a major mode of transportation was by boat/ship.

So I’m amending this month’s suggested Genre-ista theme and including “ships and boats” because I want to stick with the theme and want to introduce you to this well-written, entertaining, creative short story.

A friend of mine, who has never met Sarah or read any of her work, called me up shortly after Love & Magick: Mystical Stories of Romance was published. Our conversation went something like this:

Friend: “I had to read the first page of the first story a couple of times.”

Me: “Why, what was wrong?” (hear a tad of anxiety in my voice here?)

Friend: “Nothing was wrong. I had to read it more than once because it’s so powerfully written.”

Me: “Yes, it is. Sarah’s a great writer and Curse of the Neahkahnie Treasure was the perfect story to start us off.

I’ve included the first couple of pages of the story below. 

Enjoy!

Curse of the Neahkahnie Treasure
by Sarah Raplee

Father was dead.
Sorrow as strong and bone-chilling as a Pacific gale snatched Samantha Moore’s breath from her lungs. A wave of dizziness threatened to overwhelm her. She forced herself to draw another breath, and then another.
In the weeks since her beloved father had been knifed and robbed in broad daylight, she’d discovered grief lies in wait like a panther, ready to pounce and tear one’s heart out without warning. Warm tears trailed down cheeks chilled by the damp spring winds of the northern Oregon coast.
Turning away from the bustle of stevedores unloading wagon loads of supplies onto the dock, she pretended to study a huge sailing ship floating at anchor. One swipe of a dirty cotton shirtsleeve removed the evidence of tears, as well as a good deal of sweat and windblown brine from her face. Boys are not supposed to cry. She must take her emotions in hand or she would draw attention to herself. The last thing she needed was to be identified as a young woman.
A sunbeam found its way through the clouds to glint off the rippled water of the mighty Columbia River. Gulls soared on the wind. The odors of fish and pitch mixed with the tang of salt water. Astoria, Oregon, was only seven miles from the Pacific Ocean. Here the river stole salt from the sea tides the way Samantha planned to steal food and coin from the tides of people swarming the docks.
She pressed her lips into a grim line. She had never in her life broken the law, but she hadn’t eaten since stowing away on a schooner in San Francisco two days ago. The men who had murdered Father had taken his money as well as his life. She was out of funds and alone in a strange land. And she must honor her father’s dying wish.
After glancing around the docks to make sure no one paid undo attention to her, she surreptitiously ascertained the safety of her precious, accursed secret cargo. Placing a hand at the small of her back, she arched as if to stretch out a kink. First her backbone poked her palm through the fabric of her shirt. She explored the hard outline of a small spyglass case with her fingers. She had sewn a secret pocket for the brass cylinder into the rear of the baggy drawstring trousers she wore as part of her disguise.
Her mouth twisted into a grimace. Father had died because of the furled map hidden inside the metal cylinder, a map he’d discovered hidden in the false back cover of a hundred-year-old book. He was conducting research for a historical treatise on Spanish exploration in the Americas when he noticed the back cover of Las Expediciónes del Pirata Don Carlos Moreno was much thicker than the front cover. So, being Father, he investigated and found the treasure map. Unfortunately, being a man of science, he had dismissed out-of-hand the inscription on the map that stated the pirate had cursed the gold so “no man may take my treasure.”
All things considered, Samantha had come to believe the curse was real.

To find out what happens next, Love & Magick is available through Windtree Press and other major e-retailers.

© Excerpt from “Love & Magick” Copyright 2014 Sarah Raplee
© Copyright 2014 Judith Ashley

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