By Diana McCollum
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What I find fascinating about clichés is one can get across a feeling, picture or a state of being with few words which need no further explanation. True, some are used to the extreme and especially as readers we get sick to death (is that a cliché?) of hearing the clichés used over and over and over again.
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What I find fascinating about clichés is one can get across a feeling, picture or a state of being with few words which need no further explanation. True, some are used to the extreme and especially as readers we get sick to death (is that a cliché?) of hearing the clichés used over and over and over again.
I am thrilled when reading a book and I come across a new
take on an old cliché; because old clichés are not all accurate when used in
modern day language.
“I’m tired of sounding like a broken record”- Really? Most
teenagers don’t even know what a record is they’re too wrapped up in I-Tunes & CDs. A broken record is when they beat someone else at track etc.
“More troubles than Carter’s have pills”-How many of us
still shop at a Carter’s Pharmacy? I don’t think I’ve ever seen a Carter’s
Pharmacy.
“It’s the cat’s pajamas”-My children had no clue what this
meant.
“It’s not worth a plugged nickel”- I give, what is a plugged
nickel??
“Johnny come lately”—Huh??
And then there are others that are timeless:
“Kiss and tell”
“Poison pen”
“love is blind”
“all’s fair in love and war”
“beauty is in the eye
of the beholder”
I beseech you when you are writing if you are tempted to use
a cliché, try and make it more current or different so the reader is surprised
and doesn't roll his eyes at yet another cliché. Here is an example from Nora
Roberts book, “Homeport”.
Instead of saying “She was cold to the bone”—“The damp,
snapping wind iced the bones through to the marrow.” Much clearer picture, more
of an impact and chilled me just reading it.
What are some of the clichés you dislike? What are some you
do like?


