Showing posts with label writer voice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writer voice. Show all posts

Wednesday, August 12, 2020

A Writer's Voice



A writer's voice bubbles over with their feelings about their topic. Change those feelings and the voice used changes with it. Sometimes its as easy as making a decision. I recently heard one author say he had found himself using the 
word “seedy” to describe inner cities too often. He stopped and took the time to imagine how that would affect a reader living in an inner city. Now he makes certain to never use that or related words, and notes that consciously seeking better ways to describe city life has changed the way he writes.

Voice changes naturally when writers have a specific audience in mind. Think of your speaking voice. I bet it changes naturally depending on your audience, just like mine does. I can baby talk with the best of them when facing an infant or toddler. A teen or tween, an acquaintance or friend, coworker or boss, to a relative about the boss all require different voices. When I concentrate on who my listener is, I code switch without needing to consciously think about the change.

A writer's voice is the sum of the choices he or she makes while communicating information about a subject, and information about themselves, to a particular audience. Personality, attitudes, beliefs, and feelings about things, all being conveyed to a certain audience. Mainstream authors who want to write inclusively should first work to develop an inclusive Voice. It’s not enough to just want to write about diverse characters. An author must accurately see, hear and feel the world their diverse characters inhabit. If they can’t do that, their reader won’t be able to either.
Don't try to please everyone and end up with that voiceless "designed by committee" manuscript. Find that special audience member, and work to please him or her.
Now take a deep breath and let your voice flow.

Wednesday, February 26, 2020

The Dangers of Drummers

by M. L. Buchman

This month's suggested topic is "Marching to a Different Drummer."


As a writer, I've found this to be a major problem. For me there are always Twelve drummers drumming (at the minimum). Anyone who has followed my writing career can attest to that. In fact, if you count novel series separate from short story series, I've written 32 different series. Some of those are still just two or three stories (or novels), but some are seven novels or even eleven short stories in the same series. (No wonder my head hurts.)

This is also a brilliant way to both intrigue and frustrate readers. "I love this series! When's the next book? And that series too! What about that one? Or the one over there?..."

There is good news and good news and good news here though.

The first good news is that you get to try a lot of things. Invent characters, learn things you never thought you'd learn, like the length of the Wright Brothers first powered flight being shorter than the cargo hold of a military C-5 "Galaxy" transport jet. Or that a favorite of Russian bagged snacks is toasted brown bread, rusks, in flavors such as: onion, BBQ, crabmeat, and jellied meat with horseradish. Learned all this and much more for my upcoming Miranda Chase thriller:

www.books2read.com/condor
The second good thing is that chasing after those different drummers has let me discover what works for my writerly voice. Author voice is a terribly tricky thing, because the author has no idea what it actually is. Seriously. It's up to the marketplace to tell the author, "Oh, this is the kind of story you write really well." For example, I launched my career in romantic suspense. I tried going over to contemporary romance (a sub-genre that I greatly enjoy as a reader and a writer). While I still got great ratings, I earned far fewer sales. So, I went the other way, over to action-adventure technothriller. Whoosh! I think I found my authorial voice...at least until the next cool drummer comes along. I just can't write Miranda Chase fast enough; not for the readers--for me! I just love this series.
www.mlbuchman.com/miranda-chase
The third awesome thing is that I end up creating whole worlds that I love to go back and revisit. I've recently started pulling some of those many series into collections. Revisiting these two short-story series, I got to write brand-new introductions about why I wrote each story and what they've meant to me over the time since I wrote them. I really love being able to do this and you'll definitely see more of these from me in the future.

The world of the firefighting Hotshot crews and the Fire Lookouts high in their lonely towers are only the first two that I've tackled.
https://books2read.com/the-complete-hotshots
https://books2read.com/the-complete-fire-lookouts

So, sure, following a thirty-two, or even just a dozen, drummers has its drawbacks (like making your brain feel like it's going to explode).But I highly recommend it! 

Why?

Because it creates so much fun!


M.L. "Matt" Buchman has 60+ thriller and romance novels, 100 short stories, and lotsa audiobooks. PW says his thrillers will make “Tom Clancy fans open to a strong female lead clamor for more.” Booklist declared three novels “Top-10 Romances of the Year.” A project manager with a geophysics degree, he’s designed and built houses, flown and jumped out of planes, solo-sailed a 50’ sailboat, and bicycled solo around the world…and he quilts. More at: www.mlbuchman.com.