Showing posts with label A discreet Gentleman of discovery. Show all posts
Showing posts with label A discreet Gentleman of discovery. Show all posts

Saturday, March 30, 2019

Writing What You’re Not: Diverse Characters vs. Cultural Appropriation by Kris Tualla


Back in 2010, I decided to write a deaf private investigator ~ in the 1700s. I called him a “Discreet Gentleman of Discovery” and he turned into a five-book series published by Desert Breeze Publishing whose Editor-in-Chief had a severe hearing loss. DBP closed their doors last year, so when the rights reverted to me I re-edited and republished the series. And I decided to write a sixth book.

That book takes place twenty years later and is the story of the deaf foster son who takes over the discovery business along with his hearing brother. His heroine in the story is legally (not totally) blind. In the 1700s.

For the record, I have excellent hearing. I am quite nearsighted, but not to an extreme. I am writing “what I am not.”

Most discussions about diversity center on race, so my deaf characters flew under the radar until 2016 when I had the audacity to apply to speak at the Romance Writers of America national conference about writing differently-abled characters.

A month before the conference, when the speakers and their topics were published, I was publically and viciously attacked in a Twitter storm which had me pulled from the program within 12 hours. Loooong story shortened, after I did get to co-present alongside a very kind author with a hearing loss, she said to me:

“The real question here is why aren’t we talking about this? Why were you the one to stand up?”

Excellent question.

The world of “othered” people is clamoring for more books which represent them. I want to continue to write books that represent them. But many don’t think I should. Some call it “stealing our voice.” Others call it “appropriating my culture.”

What they do not take into consideration are:

1. Right now, the demand far outstrips the supply. Better get writing, and write fast, as the void is growing.

2. With all of us working together, then the “other” becomes mainstream. Someone might read my “discreet gentleman” because they love the rest of the Hansen series, and be so intrigued that they seek out other books with deaf characters. Win-win.

3. Will everyone get it “right”? No. And that is true across the entire spectrum of books about everything. But when we who are writing “what we are not” are silenced, then those of us who 1) research heavily, and 2) utilize those who know to proof our manuscripts, are made the enemy. Lose-lose.

So I forge on. My next book after the deaf/blind characters has a heroine with a trauma-induced stutter who passes herself off as a man ~ in the mid 1800s. Not sure what will come after that. What I do know is that I will continue to make my characters diverse.

In 2016 at the RWA conference, several people recognized my name when they saw my nametag. Most were very sorry that they were not able to hear what I had to say. One woman however, broke my heart when she said, “My nephew has cerebral palsy, I wanted to write a character with CP but now I’m afraid to.”

I hugged her and whispered, “Write the damn book.”


KRIS TUALLA
Kris Tualla, a dynamic award-winning and internationally published author of historical romance and suspense, has created a dynasty with The Hansen Series. A member of Romance Writers of America, the Historical Novel Society, and Sisters in Crime, she was a guest instructor at the Virginia G. Piper Center for Creative Writing at Arizona State University. Two of her WWII novels have been optioned for a limited series.

Saturday, April 8, 2017

When an historical deaf hero sits down at your laptop…by Kris Tualla

Several years ago, I read an article in the Romance Writer Report which stated that women are attracted to a man who "looks at them like they are the only thing in the room." I found that idea intriguing. So I started wondering, what sort of man would have that kind of intensity in his gaze?

A deaf man would.

So, I decided to write a deaf hero. Because I write historicals and Norsemen, I set him in the 1700s in Christiania (now Oslo) Norway. Next, I needed to figure out what a deaf man could do to support himself, after being passed over as heir because of his hearing loss. He told me he solves crimes because (in his gestures): When people find out I'm deaf, they forget I'm in the room.

Plus, he reads lips, courtesy of the older cousin brought in to be his “ears” when he was young.

I contacted a friend who is a sign language interpreter to run my ideas past her and get advice from. She told me that my hero needed to have acquired spoken language before losing his hearing, or there would be slew of other problems to deal with. That was excellent, and critical, information. I wrote that Brander was seven years old when his second eardrum burst irreparably, the result of multiple ear infections.

After dragging poor Brander Hansen through all kinds of emotional torture ~ and having him track a serial killer along Norway's southern coastline ~ he gets his "Happily Ever After" with the heroine. I typed The End, and thought I was done.

He didn't agree. After a few months, Brander nudged me and asked if I was really certain I wanted to let go of him. And for a mute-by-choice deaf man, he has a very loud voice.

I had to admit, I wasn't.

With a deep breath and a squaring of shoulders, I turned back to look at Brander's life with his new wife, Regin Kildahl. Turns out, the spunky Baroness wasn't ready to sit back and enjoy a quiet life either, and their shared precarious adventures filled five full-length novels.

Writing a deaf hero in the 1700s was a challenge, to be honest. Aside from the lack of a formal sign language, the common perception of the deaf was that they were stupid. Of course, Brander turns that to his advantage.

As I was typing along, I occasionally made mistakes. When I did, I worked them into the narrative. Like this line: “Regin lowered her voice…” Oops. Well, go on with the thought: “…before she remembered she didn't have to.”

I even had a line of dialog where Regin points her finger at her deaf and mute husband and shouts, "Don't you ever say that to me again, do you hear me?" Who wouldn’t use words they were accustomed to in the heat of an argument?

Brander looks at her like she's crazy and asks: Do you realize what you just said?
"You know what I mean!" she retorts.

Realistic. And humorous.

I have a scene in the second book "A Discreet Gentleman of Matrimony," when a doctor asks to look into Brander's ears. My discreet gentleman experiences a moment of shock and wonders if he could regain his hearing.

He cannot. And when he thinks about it, Brander realizes that he is a better man because he is deaf. To regain his hearing at this stage of his life would be a detriment to his career.

That is a very realistic response. Not heroic. Not bitter. No pounding anyone with a politically correct agenda. Just real.

Another challenge was figuring out a way to let the reader know HOW the dialog was being delivered. I decided on:

"Spoken words are in quotation marks."
Written words are in italics.
And when Brander gestures: His sentences look like dialog, but without any quote marks.

Aside from the 80% 5-Star ratings Brander has garnered, the most gratifying response to the books came from a reviewer of books and movies with disability themes: http://reviews.paradevo.net/2012/08/a-discreet-gentleman-of-discovery.html

After all, getting it “right” is the most respectful portrayal of all.
KRIS TUALLA

Historical Romance Author Kris Tualla is a former Genre-ista and a frequent guest at Romancing the Genres. There are now 17 full-length novels in the Hansen Series plus 3 novellas. These comprise 5 trilogies plus one 5-book set. And I am very happy to report that the Hansen Series has a 4.75-star overall rating on Amazon.


Tuesday, June 3, 2014

This kid will melt your heart…

Several years ago I met a woman with whose son I had a connection. Our connection superseded mine with her son’s, so our friendship grew. As time went on, her daughter birthed a boy with special needs. His name is Julian.

Julian "Bug" Cruz was born at 28 weeks - 3 months premature. Doctors gave him little chance of survival following a massive brain bleed the night he was born. When he did survive, they said he would be a vegetable. When he surpassed being a vegetable, they still said he would never sit up, speak, hear, crawl, stand, or run.

On May 19, 2012 (his 10th birthday) Julian won both bronze and gold medals in the Special Olympics Florida State Games as a cyclist. Although he has shunted hydrocephalus, cerebral palsy, epilepsy, and is severely hearing-impaired, Julian faced every obstacle with courage and a winner's attitude.

Because speech is his primary mode of communication, he is far behind his profoundly-deaf, ASL-fluent peers; as a result he could not attend the Florida School for the Deaf with any hope for success. In addition, his health problems and multiple disabilities prevented him from attending a public school. His best opportunity was to attend Blossom Montessori School for the Deaf in Clearwater, where deaf and hard-of-hearing student (like Bug) learn from American Sign Language-fluent teachers. This school is equipped to handle children with additional health concerns.

So what’s the catch?

Tuition for Blossom School is $7,000 per school year. Plus, Julian and his mother have to move to Clearwater during the school year, which is an additional and crippling expense.

Enter “Go Fund Me”!

Julian’s father, Eddie Cruz, created a page where friends and strangers alike can make donations to help offset the cost of Julian’s education: http://www.gofundme.com/gobug. I double-dog dare every single one of you to go to this page, click on “More Updates” to scroll through Eddie’s poignant posts, and look at photos of Julian without shedding a tear or two. This kid has more spunk than anyone I know.

In 2012 Desert Breeze published the first in my 5-book-series historical deaf hero (Brander Hansen, “A Discreet Gentleman of Discovery”) and I donated all of my royalties for the month the book was released.

Furthermore - if you can figure out who Julian’s uncle is (my friend’s son), I’ll donate $10 for every right answer emailed to me at Kris@KrisTualla.com.

Our subject this month was “shout-out to charity” and neither Eddie, nor his mother-in-law, had any idea that I wrote this post. But they will.

It seems we all are inundated daily with outstretched palms asking for donations – heck, I can’t stop at any major intersection without having to face yet another person with a cardboard sign asking for cash. So an attitude of skepticism is warranted, no question about it.

But this little guy is real. His parents love him and want the best for him. They have shaped their lives around helping Julian be all that he can be. If you feel so moved, donate. Or if not, simply share Eddie’s link. You never know.

Thanks for reading this post to the end.

Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Underdog Heroes?



by Sarah Raplee
 
I have to admit I have a soft spot for underdogs.
My favorite fictional hero is Julian Cash from Alice Hoffman's magical romantic thriller, Turtle Moon. Julian is born so ugly that his mother abandons him and bees won’t sting him. Against the odds, Julian grows into a policeman with moral integrity and the capacity for great heroism and great love.
 
Brander Hansen, the hero of Kris Tualla’s historical romance, A Discreet Gentleman of Discovery, is another wonderful underdog hero. Deaf since age seven, Brander loses his inheritance when he’s twenty-three through no fault of his own. He goes on to earn his own estate as an eighteenth century Norwegian private eye. And he wins the heart of a beautiful, intelligent woman.
In real life, a whole group of unsung underdog heroes has recently come to my attention:
Hero Cats.
Yes, you heard me correctly: I am a fan of Feline Heroes. Underdog heroes who hiss and spit. Brave, loyal, determined companions to whom many people owe their lives.
 You may believe dogs act heroically much more often than cats do, but I’m not so sure (although I’m a HUGE fan of dogs! They work their way into most of my stories.)
Cats have gotten bad press. For example, when a dog is a hero, the headline says Hero Dog Saves Family from Fire. 
When a cat is a hero, the headline says ‘Hero’ Cat Apparently Calls 911 to Help Owner.
Let’s see, the 911 dispatcher gets a call but no one speaks on the line. The dispatcher hangs up and calls back. No one answers. The police investigate and discover the owner’s cat, Tommy, lying next to the phone. The cat’s owner has fallen out of his wheelchair and can’t summon help. The owner has worked with the cat for three years to teach him to dial 911 using a speed dial button.
I ask you, why is the word hero in quotes? Why is the word apparently there at all?
Original NBC News report

Was that case the exception that proves the rule? An unusually intelligent, loyal, well-trained cat? You be the judge. Let’s examine a few more cases of kitty heroics:
YouTube video of a hero cat protecting campers from alligators
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_29k6dJ6DA
YouTube video of a hero cat protecting a family from a wild bear
www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-BD4wL_8TM
June 2010: Fearless Cat Saves Owner from Dog AttackA tortoiseshell named Lima distracts two pitbulls who attack her owner by attacking one of the dogs herself. This distracts them, giving the owner’s husband a chance to pull her inside the house. The cat escapes unharmed. Original Blog Story
November 2011: Owner Says Cat Saved Him from Fire
(Notice how the headline casts doubt on the story?) The cat jumped up and down on his lap until he woke up.
Original Fox Carolina News Story
CHARLEY
 August 2012:  In the UK, Charley, a black-and-white puss, was the winner out of fifteen hero cats that made the finals for the Hero Cat title at Cats Protection's prestigious National Cat Awards 2012. According to doctors, Charley saved her owner’s life when she had a diabetic attack in the middle of the night. Charley awakened the owner’s husband and led him to the bathroom where she lay on the floor. Charley won a trophy, a three months’ supply of cat food, a year's supply of Verdo Cat Litter and a framed photograph of himself. (Verdo Cat Litter sponsors the award. )
Original Story on Cat Protection’s Website

Do you think cats have gotten bad press? Why or why not?